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Old 04-04-2018, 06:47 PM   #8
Steve Rindsberg
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I like "Be" better. Shorter, punchier and to me it seems more positive. You'll BE a picture handing pro, vs You'll become one (but maybe screw some stuff up on your way there).

But "Become" works too.

I definitely prefer the first two. Gut reaction, no logic whatever.

   
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