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[Ronald]

Originally Posted by Kayza

Whether it's the parent of a young enthusiast, or a spouse / so / close friend of an adult, it really doesn't come off well.

I'd say either mute the effect or make the whole figure more doll-like and the legs more articulated. Right now your at a midpoint that looks pretty bad even to people who recognize what you are doing.

I just saw that this thread has more responses. Are you referring to the cyan between the legs?

[terrie]

ronald: Are you referring to the cyan between the legs?

I believe Kayza is referring to--to quote myself:

"However--as Steve noted--the fold in the middle of the crotch cloth--codpiece?--of your image, appears to be a penis which! while certainly anatomically correct, is not perhaps what you intended...'-}}"



Terrie

[Ronald]

Originally Posted by terrie

I believe Kayza is referring to--to quote myself:

"However--as Steve noted--the fold in the middle of the crotch cloth--codpiece?--of your image, appears to be a penis which! while certainly anatomically correct, is not perhaps what you intended...'-}}"

So the seam on the crotch of the pants? Okay, maybe I'll adjust that to stop halfway down.

[terrie]

ronald: So the seam on the crotch of the pants?

Yes...the middle seam. In addition to shortening it, I'd suggest fading it out/a tad of blurring...


Terrie