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I like "Be" better. Shorter, punchier and to me it seems more positive. You'll BE a picture handing pro, vs You'll become one (but maybe screw some stuff up on your way there).
But "Become" works too. I definitely prefer the first two. Gut reaction, no logic whatever. __________________ Steve Rindsberg ==================== www.pptfaq.com www.pptools.com and stuff |
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