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Ronald
09-24-2017, 12:04 AM
Hi, everyone. Attached is a simple, Constructivist-inspired business card I'm thinking of using for my freelance design/art. I have plans for a more thematic, illustrated card, but I might also have a handful of this version as a more conservative alternative. And yes, that's my real name. I think the first post I made on here was many years back, in which I discussed job-related problems and wanted anonymity, or maybe I just thought the alter ego was amusing.

Anyhow, feedback would be appreciated.

terrie
09-24-2017, 03:58 PM
I sort of like that the font is a san serif but, I don't really care for the blocked letters (A, D, R, O, etc.) but I'm not sure why I don't care for it. Perhaps it's because of the images the letters overlay. I like the fact that your name ('-}}) is in a large point size as that draws the eye and mitigates the fact that the name in on a slant.

The design has a lot of energy and I don't find it "conservative"...'-}}



Terrie

Ronald
10-01-2017, 12:18 PM
Thanks, Terrie. Maybe I'll switch to the main variation of that font that doesn't fill in all the bowls.

terrie
10-01-2017, 01:38 PM
Sounds like a plan...'-}}



Terrie